within

Venus de Milo with Drawers - Salvador Dali, 1936

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

there came a time
when the only
place left to
hide, was
within
herself

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for The Mag

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

15 Comments

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15 responses to “within

  1. I like the simplicity of this one.

  2. Oh, that’s lovely and kind of sad to me. I agree with Gerry that the simplicity is nice in your poem. You say a lot.

  3. Laurie Kolp

    I know the feeling.

  4. Kathe W.

    oh I like this one! Very smart!

  5. oooh yes, very subtle and to the point. nicely done
    martine

  6. Helen Dehner

    Elegant and simple .. like good poetry (and sculpture) should be.

  7. othermary

    Achingly good. Kudos.

  8. Perfect, and in so few words.

  9. hypercryptical

    Oh well done – we do tend to hide much of ourselves…

    Anna :o]

  10. ah, there did indeed – well done

  11. Lovely in its simplicity…

  12. Succinct and liked. Thank you

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