we wait

stubbornly expecting
that tap on the shoulder
voice in the ear
vision of enlightenment
tug on the heart

all the while
there was another
who was in turn

waiting on us


wait (Photo credit: CmdrFire)

Written for One Single Impression


Filed under Poetry, Poetry - Prompts

6 responses to “Waiting

  1. Wait I will think of something clever and intelligent to say. Wait …nope nothing…OH there it is very well written on a subject many do not have the patience to do.

  2. Well, I’m diggin it; a fine dissertation on our interconnectedness, even where we least expect it. Well done.

  3. Nice turn at the ending ~

    Cheers ~

  4. Love they way this comes full circle….great idea on the photo…

  5. This is truly beautiful. Thanks for sharing!

Some of what I write is true, some is fiction; most is merely possibility.

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