Meticulous in his planning,
every detail mapped out,
his fastidious nature had
made him a success.
It was only much later,
when he surveyed his
impecable nest
that he realized it
was not built for two.

Written for The Mag photo prompt.



Filed under Poetry, Poetry - Prompts

7 responses to “Alone

  1. Shawna

    Perfectly gloomy ending, as always. 🙂

  2. mmm yeah, got to be intentional about that…my bach pad the year before marriage was not suitable either….

  3. hypercryptical

    Hah – sometimes we realise too late that we have not planned well enough.

    Anna :o]

  4. well planned….niely done and thanks for sharing

  5. Tess Kincaid

    Fastidiousness is not always a good thing…

  6. Kutamun

    The tyranny of reason strikes again !

Some of what I write is true, some is fiction; most is merely possibility.

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