Last Look

He paused in his leaving
to risk one last look,

nothing had changed —

he still felt small
beneath her gaze.









Written for The Mag photo prompt.



Filed under Poetry, Poetry - Prompts

13 responses to “Last Look

  1. Still, I love that he took the risk. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Nicely done!

  2. suz

    oh perfect……short lines that hit the mark….

  3. Shawna

    So good, Mark. ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Succinct and very effective, Mark.

  5. It was worth a shot anyway ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. hypercryptical

    Nicely done indeed!

    Anna :o]

  7. You said so much with so few words. Great!

  8. Guess he’d been cut down to size… ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. That he had to look one more time,priceless. Very nicely written.

Some of what I write is true, some is fiction; most is merely possibility.

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