February 27, 2012 · 4:27 pm
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February Haiku Challenge – 27


Timid opening
Past David’s Star, broken hearts,
Gates of Israel.

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 27 – February 27th – Theme: Paint the Image
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4 responses to “February Haiku Challenge – 27”

  1. lolamouse
    February 27, 2012 at 5:05 pm

    Broken hearts indeed. Lovely haiku. Thank you for visiting my blog.

    Reply
  2. Andy Sewina
    February 27, 2012 at 6:53 pm

    Yeah, there’s a lot of broken hearts associated with these gates, nicely described.

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  3. Grace
    February 27, 2012 at 7:30 pm

    I like the second line…very nice haiku ~

    Reply
  4. Chevrefeuille
    February 28, 2012 at 10:15 am

    Well done for todays theme. Lovely haiku … very well balanced.

    Reply

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