February Haiku Challenge – 23

A child’s eyes light up,
letting you know right away,
it was a good gift.

It was a good gift,
a surprise full of meaning —
gratitude swells hearts.

Gratitude swells hearts,
everything is perfect when
a child’s eyes light up.

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Filed under Haiku, Poetry, Poetry - Prompts

5 responses to “February Haiku Challenge – 23

  1. A delightful chain of haiku, conveying warmth and caring.

  2. Nothing like seeing a child’s eyes lit up!

  3. Very nice cascade – and subject … thank you for sharing.
    Here is my Day 23.

  4. I like this so much, children are so open usually. The Haiku is very nice.

  5. a child’s eyes light up… beautiful.. beautiful..

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