February Haiku Challenge – 12B

More in keeping with the theme, which I overlooked while dealing with the form the first time.

Color outside the lines,
make your own picture of life,
joy your creation
Joy your creation,
make your own picture of life,
color outside the lines.

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Filed under Haiku, Poetry, Poetry - Prompts

7 responses to “February Haiku Challenge – 12B

  1. Definitely more colourful – almost a rebellion.

  2. Outside the lines is the place to be. Effective use of mirror form contrasts with the chaotic message. Interesting, and a lot going on in these few lines.

  3. “color outside the lines” — oh the permission to do so!!

  4. Yeah, colourful stuff!

    Nicely presented!

  5. ‘make your own picture of life’.. Loved your thoughts Mark..

  6. a brave step…color outside the lines ~

Some of what I write is true, some is fiction; most is merely possibility.

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