Tempted —

ivory beacon
in an

Consumed —



Posted for The Mag photo prompt.



Filed under Poetry

14 responses to “Fallen

  1. Doctor FTSE

    Way to go though, eh?

  2. These words are echoing through my mind… just lovely, mark!

  3. kay

    i loved every considered word..fabulous..x

  4. JC

    Wow! So very well done

  5. The is excellent. You have stripped it down to it’s essence. Every word counts.

  6. Shawna

    I find snippet poetry to be so much more effective. Another great one, Mark.

  7. Helen

    The good doctor nailed it with his comment … what a way to go!!

  8. Concise……. consumed……. complete. Thank you.

  9. Straight to the pit, perhaps? LOL

  10. I like your take…nice write…

Some of what I write is true, some is fiction; most is merely possibility.

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