How much more lonely
The barren winter branches
For lack of birdsong.
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A beautiful haiku, of the best kind: seasonal.
Mark,
Welcome to the Challenge.. Happy to have you as a challenger.. Well, as ViV said, It is seasonal.. 🙂
Someone is Special
I like the barren winter branches ~
My share:
http://everydayamazin.blogspot.com/2012/01/music.html
Yeah, this is spot on, I saw an empty birds nest in a leafless tree today!
When Hurricane Katrina hit the New Orleans area — we went without birdsong for months … such an eerily quiet and barren feeling!! Nicely done!
So much longing in these three lines–lovely 🙂