Tempted –
ivory beacon
in an
ebony
void.
Consumed –
another
angel
falls.
Posted for The Mag photo prompt.
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Way to go though, eh?
Just wow!
bang….nice….
These words are echoing through my mind… just lovely, mark!
i loved every considered word..fabulous..x
Wow! So very well done
The is excellent. You have stripped it down to it’s essence. Every word counts.
sad, well put.
I find snippet poetry to be so much more effective. Another great one, Mark.
The good doctor nailed it with his comment … what a way to go!!
Concise……. consumed……. complete. Thank you.
nice study in contrast.
haunting suppleness
Straight to the pit, perhaps? LOL
I like your take…nice write…